L.A.Reflection


By: Bryce Butka
I chose the small moment narrative because I really feel that I zoomed in on my moment. Narrative writers know that they can’t write a big watermelon story. Writers know they have to write a small seed story. Writers know to write their story with a lot of juicy words to make there story better. Writers remember to make a story in their head.
My story was hard because I had to remember exactly what happened and then I had to zoom in on that moment, I had I to try to see what happened when I fell down those stairs. It was also hard because there were a lot of things I needed to remember where I found my cousins and then I had to find my brothers. I also had to find out how I fell and it was so long ago. Zooming in on the moment really helped me write with details. If I had a chance to do this over I would put more dialog in the story.

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